One of the seniors asked me to rap on a situation "A boy had a misunderstanding with his gf. He tries to win her back with a rap". I tried for it. Hope it has come good... Its a freestyle rap.
Hey baby… I can’t believe all what happened is true
But tell you what??? I have already started missing you
All these days without you… I felt so hard going through
Yes… Those harsh words and feelings came out of the blue
I saw my life in you… you can’t just move out of the way
You are my life, please don’t take my breath away!
I forgot what is happiness without seeing your smile
I want you back; I need not bother any mile
I am dehydrated; my body is starting to wear
I am hoping you would come back and replenish it with your tears
I can’t forget about you, there are no words and phrases
I can’t live without you, nor your senses
I miss my vision…. your beautiful and gorgeous eyes
The beauty that I could see in your pearls, they are too nice
Like inseparable lovebirds are your lovely ears
To which I can lay my burden upon without any fear
Do I need to mention your nose that holds my breath?
You are in me in each and every cell you get
The words from your mouth so comforting and lovable,
Kisses from your rosy lips are so insatiable.
The skin that belongs to me alone, where I can feel the warmth
The softness and tenderness that proved to me “love is more than lust”
The streets are dark and so is my life… Am I entering into hell?
No… its because I am not seeing you… you know that very well
I am losing all my attention… leave alone the tension
Since our first meet, you gained my concentration,
No matter what, to win you back is now my mission
Come on baby… throw light into my vision!
I will be waiting for you… waiting for my life
Share it with me, with hugs and kisses
To have you back is my sheer bliss
I need you honey, till my last day
Bring it on baby, love is our own way.

6 comments:
did a senior ask 4 dis......or u wrote dis for sum1???
neway, itz really gud like de prev 1!
no da... really a senior asked me...
i don believe it!!!!
Its very difficult to write such a LOOOONG Poem for a senior!! :P
Are you sure Kavin?
lolz... yes its difficult... I took some time and by the time I finished this rap, the senior had already convinced his gf... :p but anyway he took my rap and showed it to his gf...
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